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3rd Oct 2012, 3:35 PM in Chapter Two: Crossing Over
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CrankyStorming 3rd Oct 2012, 4:11 PM edit delete reply
I can't seem to figure out what's going on in this page. From what I can gather, first she falls down, then the other guy stabs the beast, but then he isn't there and then beast is grabbing her jacket.
Gearfish 3rd Oct 2012, 4:28 PM edit delete reply
Gearfish
Oof, I didn't realize this was so unclear. It's supposed to be a little bit confusing because she's basically fighting in the dark, but I'll try to clear it up somewhat:

She's only fighting one guy/monster and the other characters are elsewhere at the moment and not helping. She falls (from the impact of getting kicked in the gut on the previous page) and then rolls out of the way of a stab from her opponent who has reclaimed the sword/knife thing dropped a page or two ago. Then she's confused and a little disoriented and so is looking around, and then her cape gets grabbed.

Does that make any sense?
Rinkel 3rd Oct 2012, 4:53 PM edit delete reply
Rinkel
It makes sense to me, since battles can be messy and confusing (even in daylight). Lots of my fighting scenes look like that...
Gearfish 3rd Oct 2012, 11:18 PM edit delete reply
Gearfish
I'll get better at this eventually, there's more fights to come yet.
cattservant 3rd Oct 2012, 5:26 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
Thump and bump
Stab and stick.
Where you grab
That's the trick!

In the dark
Just can't see?
Time for some
Strategy!
Gearfish 3rd Oct 2012, 11:18 PM edit delete reply
Gearfish
Sweet! You wrote a poem!
LooeyQ 3rd Oct 2012, 6:31 PM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
Look out behind you!!! Ohhh one panel too late!

Great page!!! :D
Gearfish 3rd Oct 2012, 11:19 PM edit delete reply
Gearfish
Thanks!
Centcomm 3rd Oct 2012, 7:52 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
I was following the fight. looks good to me..looking for the next page! :D
Gearfish 3rd Oct 2012, 11:19 PM edit delete reply
Gearfish
Thank you! There will be another page next week!
(DE)(AD) 5th Oct 2012, 3:25 PM edit delete reply
(DE)(AD)
Great Work as always :D